Erin- so demanding....! Ok- graphically be consistent- figures in colour or b+w. What happens out of the frame- below and to the sides- invent spaces anew of differing scales. Show hierarchy with the types and densities of occupation. Describe a narrative- currently this is not clear. What story are you trying to tell about this space, ore spaces?
Jonathan, I left the colour and B+W because the photographs were from different periods of time and media. I thought it looked cool? maybe not... Also this is not a straight picture of my model it is several photos merged, would you like me to carry on and create a larger overall view of the space or did you think it was just one photo of the model. Thanks
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Erin- so demanding....! Ok- graphically be consistent- figures in colour or b+w. What happens out of the frame- below and to the sides- invent spaces anew of differing scales. Show hierarchy with the types and densities of occupation. Describe a narrative- currently this is not clear. What story are you trying to tell about this space, ore spaces?
Jonathan, I left the colour and B+W because the photographs were from different periods of time and media. I thought it looked cool? maybe not...
Also this is not a straight picture of my model it is several photos merged, would you like me to carry on and create a larger overall view of the space or did you think it was just one photo of the model.
Thanks
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