Tala- thanks for posting- haven't seen you in school for a while... The drawing is quite difficult to understand. What are the sections of? I think the choice of a cinema as a programme is fine but cinemas have very specific requirements and it would be good for you to tackle these issues head-on alongside other issues about qualities and sequences of spaces, light levels, secrecy etc. Can you give your drawings titles? Also the text on the left is unnecessary- turn the ideas into drawings and lose the essay if you can. Try to collage the interiors for Friday or maybe make a model that captures some the qualities you are trying to create.
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Tala- thanks for posting- haven't seen you in school for a while...
The drawing is quite difficult to understand. What are the sections of? I think the choice of a cinema as a programme is fine but cinemas have very specific requirements and it would be good for you to tackle these issues head-on alongside other issues about qualities and sequences of spaces, light levels, secrecy etc. Can you give your drawings titles? Also the text on the left is unnecessary- turn the ideas into drawings and lose the essay if you can. Try to collage the interiors for Friday or maybe make a model that captures some the qualities you are trying to create.
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